Awaiting

I take a step
as I find
the world
doesn't look
the way
I look at things 
waves of thoughts
restlessly
step back
despite
meeting the shore
like the endless horizon
who seem to
kiss
end of sea
yet illusion dissolve
as they actually
are miles apart
I look
at the dusk
my yellow enthusiasm
slowly
sinking
in the sea of calmness
As night dawns
hope twinkles
awaiting for
a breezy dawn

Reviews

[Damien Davison]

Wow, you created a really nice effect there with your words, I felt as if I were reading ocean waves. I'm impressed, that was a very creative idea!

[adreamygal]

Thanks Dam. Heartfelt, perhaps thats why it gave such effect! :)