Inside Outside

A truth in 14 words!

The commotion outside
disturbs
the peace inside

The silent inner
disturbs
the world outside

Reviews

[Joey Johnson]

Nice truth, with a small amount of words. Nice Haiku. Good job.

[adreamygal]

Thank you Joey! It isn't a haiku, just a random thought :) Glad you liked it :)

[Joey Johnson]

I went with haiku, reminded me of one. I still enjoyed it though.

[adreamygal]

Glad that it reminded you :) Thanks !! :)