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A Poem by adornoscousin
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A very weird poem

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Some stars 
Might be evil 
Might be devils
But I don’t know which
Because the evil ones hide
In tool sheds or tabernacles 
In burn pits
And
Scheme with green lobotomists
On a seemingly lazy Sunday
Eve

© 2024 adornoscousin


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Well “a very weird poem” is an apt description for this, but that’s hardly a bad thing. I can’t say I think I fully grasped what was going on but that’s also not a bad thing. I embraced the uncertainty and just tried to go along with it. There’s a sense of latent paranoia while you read this, like we’re in some dystopian film and fighting against an ambiguous evil. I enjoyed its weirdness.

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Well “a very weird poem” is an apt description for this, but that’s hardly a bad thing. I can’t say I think I fully grasped what was going on but that’s also not a bad thing. I embraced the uncertainty and just tried to go along with it. There’s a sense of latent paranoia while you read this, like we’re in some dystopian film and fighting against an ambiguous evil. I enjoyed its weirdness.

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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adornoscousin
adornoscousin

Manchester, MD



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I am an assistant professor of education by day and a writer/artist by night. I am currently creating a graphic novel. more..

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