Holding hands

Holding hands

A Poem by aditya gawade

The night seems so bright
Even in darkness I see light
Even a lonely place seems like fairyland
When I hold your hand

A spark in my heart
A smile on your lips
That's all that I think of
When I hold your hand

In your eyes I see the world
Our dreams and hopes seem strung together
The way you look at me
Makes me keep holding your hand

We walk together on the warm sand
Under the scenic and colorful sunset
The road seems easier and no longer
For we walk together holding hands

I tell you that you are my world
You look not and don't say a word
But I feel you clutching my hand
That's when I know I won't have to  let go of your hand

© 2014 aditya gawade


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aditya gawade
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This is a beautiful poem, it takes bravery to be so open, and free in love, but thats when you know it's real. I saw some spelling errors, in the last stanza, you missed a "don't". "You look not and dnt say a word"

Posted 10 Years Ago


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aditya gawade

10 Years Ago

thank you for the review
Yup ya that error needs to be corrected
thanks :)

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Added on May 10, 2014
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