About me

About me

A Poem by Aditi Mahajan
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This gives a brief description about me! funny :D

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About me-
You wish to read about me
Then see....
I am a creative writer,
Yeah! A better fighter.
I try to do things new,
With a crazy hue.

I love dancing in rain. 
I love explorations, 
sometimes they're beyond my expectations.
I am a girl nice....
Won't hurt you, 
even if you hit me twice.


I like to take pictures
Of various natures.
I am one of MY kind,
Please keep this in your mind.

-Aditi

© 2012 Aditi Mahajan


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This is a cute poem, full of positive expressions. In your lines you invite the reader to become your friend and to accept the fact that we are all unique. The words have a lilting flow and a friendly feel. It's interesting how, intentionally or not, each verse decreases in line number from 7 to 6 then 4. A pleasant poem.

Posted 12 Years Ago


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I love this write...Thank you for sharing...:)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

lovely write, you seem a great writer.

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Aditi Mahajan

11 Years Ago

THANKS! :)
If all that is true...Your a gem of a person then..

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Aditi Mahajan

12 Years Ago

thank you :)
Very lovely introduction in verses.
Congratulations, Aditi.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

very cute.. a perfect description of who you are.. very well written, I enjoyed this one till the end.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

trying to explore depths of simplicity.......fine nd intelligent work.......

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

i like it..i like the pride you shown in the first stanza..but frankly i dont like the modest way you mentioned in the second one..you shouldnt put yourself in an inferior position that you dont care even if you are hit twice, i think this refers weakness unlike how you started the poem saying you are a better fighter!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is a cute poem, full of positive expressions. In your lines you invite the reader to become your friend and to accept the fact that we are all unique. The words have a lilting flow and a friendly feel. It's interesting how, intentionally or not, each verse decreases in line number from 7 to 6 then 4. A pleasant poem.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

You are a very very interesting person. Good to have a controlled temper and enjoy taking pictures of nature. Good to meet you. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

"even if you hit me twice." I wouldn't even imagine it.
You seem like an exciting person. One of your kind certainly, and kind. =)

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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