This is a cute poem, full of positive expressions. In your lines you invite the reader to become your friend and to accept the fact that we are all unique. The words have a lilting flow and a friendly feel. It's interesting how, intentionally or not, each verse decreases in line number from 7 to 6 then 4. A pleasant poem.
i like it..i like the pride you shown in the first stanza..but frankly i dont like the modest way you mentioned in the second one..you shouldnt put yourself in an inferior position that you dont care even if you are hit twice, i think this refers weakness unlike how you started the poem saying you are a better fighter!
This is a cute poem, full of positive expressions. In your lines you invite the reader to become your friend and to accept the fact that we are all unique. The words have a lilting flow and a friendly feel. It's interesting how, intentionally or not, each verse decreases in line number from 7 to 6 then 4. A pleasant poem.
You are a very very interesting person. Good to have a controlled temper and enjoy taking pictures of nature. Good to meet you. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote
About me-
You wish to read about me
Then see....
I am a creative writer,
Yeah! A better fighter.
I try to do things new,
With a crazy hue.
I love dancing in rain.
I love explorations,
som.. more..