Happy Weather

Happy weather makes everyone happy!

Happy Weather

Wind is blowing outside,

Soothing  fragarances making me wild.

Standing in porch,

Without a torch,

Because there’s moonlight

Making everything bright!

Listening to various tunes,

But still humming a stupid song on dunes.

This gives me peace of mind,

And makes memories rewind.

Now clouds have covered those stars

Which remind everyone to never create wars.

Fresh breeze; please be there…

Till I call everyone here.

This happy weather makes me say ‘wow’

And mom is shouting,

‘Go to sleep now’.

 

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

I enjoyed the poem. You had good thoughts and hope in the poem. Funny how we can look at life and can't understand why we can all desire peace and calm. I like the flow of thoughts and the very good ending. Thank you for sharing the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

[Aehr]

very simple but meaningful at the same time. Your poem expresses an ordinary evening with something extraordinary, when seen from your eyes. well penned.

[GunMetal]

A small reminder of the beautiful workings of the world that we sometimes take for granted. A nice poem.

[Pencrafter]

Your poem nicely expresses the simple pleasures in life, such as seeing the stars or smelling a fresh breeze. If people and nations would focus on more positive, happy things, there would probably be less war. Your use of different color fonts for each line is interesting. To highlight the line about wars you might try a more attention-getting color. No big deal. Your words are clear and the meanings are understandable. Nice bit of writing.

[Nidheesh Sankaran]

Beautiful train of words and rhymes.......

[SUGATA M]

This is enjoyable throughout; I can relate this with my own experiences, specially when a moonlit night with clouds floating around between the stars and moon....very nicely expressed Aditi. I liked the usual response of Mom