Happy Weather

Happy weather makes everyone happy!

Happy Weather

Wind is blowing outside,

Soothing  fragarances making me wild.

Standing in porch,

Without a torch,

Because there’s moonlight

Making everything bright!

Listening to various tunes,

But still humming a stupid song on dunes.

This gives me peace of mind,

And makes memories rewind.

Now clouds have covered those stars

Which remind everyone to never create wars.

Fresh breeze; please be there…

Till I call everyone here.

This happy weather makes me say ‘wow’

And mom is shouting,

‘Go to sleep now’.

 

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

I enjoyed the poem. You had good thoughts and hope in the poem. Funny how we can look at life and can't understand why we can all desire peace and calm. I like the flow of thoughts and the very good ending. Thank you for sharing the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

[Sami Khalil]

Well penned...

[zainul]

Nice poem in colors.

[Mak Goalie]

such a fresh piece of writing.i was connected

[Shy Girl]

I enjoyed reading this piece...little pieces of life highlighted makes us appricate them all the more. :)

[Aditi Mahajan]

@reflectus- i hv corrected dat... :)

[reflectingus]

Haha, aw what a cute little poem! The weather indeed does have the power to change your mood in seconds, and what you have here is beautiful, vivid imagery, and I found myself smiling as I read this. I would say, there are a few minor grammatical errors, ("Listening various tunes" should be "Listening to various tunes") but yeah, great write, nevertheless.

[khalid]

i like the way how you connected between nice weather and peaceful world..
i like the images you have drawn about such a nice world with happy wather. but i would rather if it were climate because climate is more permanent while wather is fast changeable.
i have really enjoyed reading this nice poem
thank you for sharing

[Donald Cole]

this makes me giggle. I like its fancy free aura and so i guess this is representative of your description of you......cute and easy to read
nice
Don

[AK]

Brilliant poem! It is simple yet very nice, the rhyming scheme compliments it. I loved the different colours used and the meaning behind it, keep writign!