I am free

I am free

 

I am free

Don’t see me with a glee

I do many things

coz’ I can do anything.

 

I am happy

Don’t see with your moustache snappy

I can’t be sad

coz’ I am mad.

 

I am crazy

Don’t see me O’ lazy

I can’t be bored…

coz’ I try everything new.

 

I am free

Don’t see me with a glee

I do many things

coz’ I can do anything.

 

 

Reviews

[Pencrafter]

Your poem has a simplicity of statement. It describes some personality traits and attitudes. I'm not sure how being mad prevents sadness, but it's interesting. A frame of mind such as this would cause a person to feel less stress and anxiety. Even reading the lines here makes me more relaxed. I think I'll take a nap. I like your writing style and expressive statements. Well done.

[Sami Khalil]

Amazing...:),.............

[Aditi Mahajan]

thankyou! :)

[Sami Khalil]

My pleasure...:)

[Rahul]

your poems're beating my poems i think..lol great and lovely write.

[Aditi Mahajan]

ahaan.. ;) thanks!

[Suditi]

A superb poem!
The last stanza is amazing!
I love the positive attitude of the poem.
It is fun to read and also makes an inspiring read.

[Mak Goalie]

something very natural....but hard to figure out.in gloss.i wish i can be like ds

[Leslie Philibert]

Nice piece of writing that sticks to its structure, witty and clever.

[Coyote Poetry]

Nice flow of thoughts. I like the ending. Good movement of words made the poem fun to read. Thank you for the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

[Nidheesh Sankaran]

short simple

[khalid]

the poem itself is free from all limitations so it really expresses the object of it as a poem about freedom. you were really wonderful in doing that..
i have enjoyed the spirit of challenging as well as the taste of freedom in it..
i have enjoyed the words picking, the flow and the rhyme, i have enjoyed everything about it...thank you for sharing