When the first love ends

When the first love ends

A Poem by Commit it then to the flames

On my first kiss, I felt the taste of tears

It looked like as if it was a love drama

Like it was intended, the bell for departure has rung

 

By all means, I wasn't able to say

These feelings, I have repressed them

I already have decided this earlier

It's fine like this

Because I can't turn around

 

Thank you, farewell

This painful, unrequited love

If my feet stops, I might remember it

That's why . . .

 

I want to hold hands with you

No matter how much I have wished for it

These hands are empty

 

Hey, is this really a "farewell"?

You have to go

I quite understand that

Even your kindness, I understand it

 

"......let go of this hand"

I'm glad I've met you

I love you

© 2011 Commit it then to the flames


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Commit it then to the flames
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