Final Promise

Final Promise

A Poem by Commit it then to the flames

Rain begins to fall on you, as if hurrying your goodbye

Say something, anything

I'm waiting for the last promise that we'll meet again someday

yes, i'm waiting for a promise that'll never come.

 

The rain gets heavier and heavier

My red hair stands out to you like a traffic light

"Don't cry until the end" you say "I love you"

Why don't i believe in such feeling?

© 2011 Commit it then to the flames


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Added on August 5, 2011
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Commit it then to the flames
Commit it then to the flames

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