Look Closer

if you look at the pictures close enough 

you can see the happiness fade from her eyes

it was a gradual change

but nevertheless

it is there

Reviews

[Tom McRoberts]

I like the choice you've made to present this in 3rd person. It creates a sympathy for the subject, the her, in a way totally unlike what would be found in 1st person. Like she's being dissected/analysed in front of me in a manner I find uncomfortably cold. Very nice, keep it up!