cant let em sink

cant let em sink

A Poem by Adil Dar
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5TH POEM OF THE TITLE "THOUGHTS AND TRUTH". A BOOK BY "ADIL DAR"

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HoW cAn I sAy HoW i CrUsHeD eM....
lAuGhEd My OuTeR aNd HoW i FlUsHeD eM.....
hUsHeD eM wHeN i PuFfEd Em....
BeTtEr ThAn,YoU i BlEsSeD eM......

i PuShEd Em BaCk To CoUnTlEsS yArDs......
ThRoWn Em To TiMeS fOrTuNe Of HaZaRdS.....
kNoW eM bEtTeR cAn'T cOmE tO eNd.....
DiDn'T cLaIm, WiLl BeNt DoWn ThE fOrTuNe GoD's......

StIlL oN tHe JoUrNeY yA tAkInG rEsT....
wIsHiNg Ur ReSt AlL tHe BeSt Em,On TeSt....
StAnDiNg On Em I aM aT mY sIdE......
fRoM,bUrNt WiLl BrIgHtEn Em BeSt OuT oF yA zEsT.....

bRiNgInG eM tRuTh GiViNg GoOd ThInK.....
rEmInDiNg Em StAtUs BeFoRe He BlInK.....
kNoWiNg Em BeTtEr So JuDgInG eM bEtTeR......
pUt Em,In OrDeR cAn'T lEt Em SiNk.......

DeStInIeS gOaLs AnD tHiS nAmE fAmE....
bEiNg PaRt Of It,ItZ a DiRtY gAmE......
cHaNgInG tImEs WiLl StAnD oN tOp......
SeEiNg Em GlItTeRiNg CaN't HoLd ThE fLaMe SoUl! WiLl LaM.....

#to #be #continued

© 2018 Adil Dar


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I hope you won't mind...but a constructive I'd like to give is, the font style majes a reader go tangled and some might get annoyed....as few words would need more time to understand..
Nonetheless twas good read☺

Posted 6 Years Ago


Adil Dar

6 Years Ago

Thanks and will take care of the same in future....
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6 Years Ago

You're heartedly welcome...and thanks for understanding!

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Adil Dar
Adil Dar

srinagar, jammu and kashmir, India



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