I Shower in You

when I shower, I reflect on you

so that's what the water turns into

a sporadic cone around me

warm, soothing, hard to break free

drops slide down me 'till I am cleansed

through you and of you, my loving friend

my heart wails out melodies 'till you make me cough

a spluttering jolt that helps me turn you off

Reviews

[dan]

Adi, an incredible metaphorical definition of one's thought process surrounding a deep love, and a bit of a twist at the end stating that maybe the reflections on that love need to be reined in at times to prevent the SHOWER from drowning the one lost in reflection. Very nicely done. take care...dan

[stargirl23]

Thank you!

[Randhir kaur]

That's so nice to read..full of warmth..good write Adi..

[stargirl23]

Thank you!

[Randhir kaur]

Mentn nt..