Raindrops

Raindrops

A Poem by Daz

Rain on my window

Drops of heaven quench this thirst
Make me whole again

© 2024 Daz


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First read of yours Jodash and I so se enjoy poems that have hidden meaning... Metaphors ...
Quite clever...and does make one think!!
Lisasview, now in Spain

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I honestly miss the rain. I'm from Washington, now living in the sunny state of California. I think I've seen it rain maybe once since I've been here. There's something special about when it rains. Thanks for sharing this lovely Haiku with us, Jodash.

Posted 3 Months Ago


Wow! Just those few words and the entire piece is wrapped up with a bow! I like this!

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on August 16, 2024
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Houston , TX



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