Raindrops

Rain on my window

Drops of heaven quench this thirst
Make me whole again

Author's Note

Reviews

[Chris Shaw]

A visually beautiful piece of brevity. Uplifting in its positivity. Lovely.

[Daz]

Thanks dear. It's good to see you.

[Chris Shaw]

Most kind of you Daz

[Pryde Foltz]

Nature does have a remarkable way of healing. I agree. Beautiful sentiment and metaphor.

[Daz]

Thanks Pryde 🙂

[Franky]

I relate to this living in drought stricken northern Minnesota. Whenever I walk around I'm followed by dust.

We need rain to quench our thirst.

[Daz]

Thanks for the review. It was a spur of the moment piece based off a cellphone a pic I took ages ago when it was raining lol. I have a love hate relationship with rain. But I do like the look of raindrops on a window. I don't know... something about it. Almost every summer there's a heat wave in Houston. It makes one hope for some kind of relief. I'll checking out your work soon.

[Franky]

Thanks! Have a good night.

[Kelly Scheppers]

I am a lover of the rain, even preferring it to a sunny day, any day. "...drops of heaven" make for quite a lovely metaphor.

[Daz]

Thanks Kelly. I like that line "drops of heaven"

[Brandy]

' Drops from heaven. '

Rain falling from above. Such a beautiful image, indeed.
Your thoughts are soft and tender. Inspiring. :)

[Arundass TP]

Beautiful perception on rain. Like an art. Good poem

[Davidgeo]

Roll the window down. Take the rain.

[Tiffany K Charles]

A short prayer that speaks so many words!! Wonderful and powerful. You did a great job executing your thoughts

[jacob erin-cilberto]

nicely metaphorical.......
j.