Raindrops

Rain on my window

Drops of heaven quench this thirst
Make me whole again

Author's Note

Reviews

[Franky]

I relate to this living in drought stricken northern Minnesota. Whenever I walk around I'm followed by dust.

We need rain to quench our thirst.

[Daz]

Thanks for the review. It was a spur of the moment piece based off a cellphone a pic I took ages ago when it was raining lol. I have a love hate relationship with rain. But I do like the look of raindrops on a window. I don't know... something about it. Almost every summer there's a heat wave in Houston. It makes one hope for some kind of relief. I'll checking out your work soon.

[Franky]

Thanks! Have a good night.

[emmajoygreen]

I recently wrote about the rain.. although many peope have far too much wet weather and lose so much to it: . for those of us who find it perhaps spiritually or at least emotionally precious and healing.. in one way there's something special and welcoming to it. Or, it is the crystal bright transparency of it, pure truth, redemption.. that matters. Many thanks for sharing, Daz. You write less than you used.. perhaps time to show your special gifts again.

[Daz]

Thank you for the review. I'm reading your poem, 'Rain' now.

[emmajoygreen]

Many thanks for reading my poem, hope you approve even a little.

[Kelly Scheppers]

I am a lover of the rain, even preferring it to a sunny day, any day. "...drops of heaven" make for quite a lovely metaphor.

[Daz]

Thanks Kelly. I like that line "drops of heaven"

[Brandy]

' Drops from heaven. '

Rain falling from above. Such a beautiful image, indeed.
Your thoughts are soft and tender. Inspiring. :)

[Arundass TP]

Beautiful perception on rain. Like an art. Good poem

[Davidgeo]

Roll the window down. Take the rain.

[Tiffany K Charles]

A short prayer that speaks so many words!! Wonderful and powerful. You did a great job executing your thoughts

[jacob erin-cilberto]

nicely metaphorical.......
j.

[Lisasview]

First read of yours Jodash and I so se enjoy poems that have hidden meaning... Metaphors ...
Quite clever...and does make one think!!
Lisasview, now in Spain