Rainy Blues

Rainy Blues

A Poem by Daz

Rain on my window

Drops of heaven quench this thirst
Make me whole again

© 2025 Daz


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I don't usually look at the YouTubes But I did this one because it's you.

I like Prince. RIP. (I like your new profile pic!)

Posted 2 Months Ago


You know, Dazzle, I can take this a few different ways depending on "my" mood.

"Make me whole again"...?

Hmmm, there's story there.

Posted 2 Months Ago


A visually beautiful piece of brevity. Uplifting in its positivity. Lovely.

Posted 5 Months Ago


Daz

5 Months Ago

Thanks dear. It's good to see you.
Chris Shaw

5 Months Ago

Most kind of you Daz
Nature does have a remarkable way of healing. I agree. Beautiful sentiment and metaphor.

Posted 5 Months Ago


Daz

5 Months Ago

Thanks Pryde 🙂
I relate to this living in drought stricken northern Minnesota. Whenever I walk around I'm followed by dust.

We need rain to quench our thirst.

Posted 6 Months Ago


Daz

6 Months Ago

Thanks for the review. It was a spur of the moment piece based off a cellphone a pic I took ages ago.. read more
Ballpark Frank

6 Months Ago

Thanks! Have a good night.
I am a lover of the rain, even preferring it to a sunny day, any day. "...drops of heaven" make for quite a lovely metaphor.

Posted 6 Months Ago


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Daz

6 Months Ago

Thanks Kelly. I like that line "drops of heaven"
' Drops from heaven. '

Rain falling from above. Such a beautiful image, indeed.
Your thoughts are soft and tender. Inspiring. :)

Posted 6 Months Ago


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Beautiful perception on rain. Like an art. Good poem

Posted 6 Months Ago


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