Glow

A dream

Last night I saw the fire in your eyes

I watched you glow

As the embers of passion

Ignited your soul

Reviews

[Green]

I feel like this could be the basis for a really cool fantasy story. I enjoyed this and it sparked so many different ideas in my head from reading it, so I kept going back and rereading it trying to decide what I wanted to land on.
You give us just enough to really be able to run with it. Thank you for sharing.

[Daz]

Thank you. I'm glad you enjoyed. I also enjoyed reading your review.

[Pryde Foltz]

A beautiful piece of brevity. An amazing moment captured:)

[Chris Shaw]

Four lines of fired up anticipation. If this was a dream, I reckon you would have been disappointed when you woke up. This played out before my eyes in slow motion. Impressed.

[Daz]

Glad you like it Chris. I enjoyed writing it.

[Amy R]

I love this, wow, magical.
Thanks for sharing
-Amy

[Daz]

Thanks for reading and commenting :)

[Amy R]

No problem

[Chris]

Unsubtle heat - shared and understood.

[Davidgeo]

What we think we see in others is often a reflection of the emotion we are feeling internally. It's pretty difficult to differentiate between the internal projection and actual shared feeling.

If you feel it burn too much, it's probably self projection. Or maybe you got really lucky...

I'm not a fan of the fake copy and paste chatgpt review praise that certain pop writers trade in on this stie so I'm just going to say, well done... I enjoyed reading you wether I got the meaning or not.

[Daz]

Thank you. I appreciate your thoughts.

[AYVID N]

I picture embers of passion glowing in eyes. A fire smoldering in a dream. We never wish to wake up from it. Your words are so poetic and captivating here.

[Daz]

Thank you so much.

[AYVID N]

You're most welcome :)

[Daz]

Divya, this poem was inspired by seeing a picture of a woman sitting outside by a fire pit. Evening time. The way her face glowed from the light was impossible to ignore. I had to write about it. Thanks again.

[Kelly Scheppers]

We need passion in our lives. It's like breathing in and out to me. It's in my life and most importantly, in my poetry. I see it in yours!

[Daz]

Thanks Kelly. I love the way you see my poetry. It's great to have you here.

[Kelly Scheppers]

Thank you!