Sleepless because of You

Sleepless because of You

A Poem by Daz
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More than just a crush

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Oh what a rush
More than a crush
What a lucky day
Got me thinking all day
I know you don't know what I'm feeling
Maybe you suspect
In retrospect,
It was meant to be
This way
Sleepless because of you

© 2024 Daz


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Excitingly restless. Do they know how you feel? Do they feel the same way? All causes of lack of sleep.

Good write,

With love,

Matthew

Posted 11 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Daz

11 Months Ago

Thanks a lot Matthew
Every one moves atleast once through this episode. Good poem

Posted 12 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Daz

11 Months Ago

Thank you Arundass
Someone has a crush. Lovely little poem. I can remember my teenage crush. Dreamy and sleepless nights. Wondering whether I could get him to notice me. Nicely penned lines.

Chris

Posted 12 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Daz

12 Months Ago

Ah not a crush on my part :) this is purely whimsical. Thanks for your review.
What better typic for a poem that a secret crush and confession. Really good work.

Posted 12 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Daz

12 Months Ago

Thank you Cherrie!

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Added on November 5, 2023
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Houston , TX



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