Sleepless because of You

Sleepless because of You

A Poem by Daz
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More than just a crush

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Oh what a rush
More than a crush
What a lucky day
Got me thinking all day
I know you don't know what I'm feeling
Maybe you suspect
In retrospect,
It was meant to be
This way
Sleepless because of you

© 2024 Daz


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Though I'm always there for nice long poems, this was short and sweet, and reminds me of a song, great work !

Posted 5 Days Ago


Daz

4 Days Ago

Thanks for your comment.
Hi, I think all gfs or bfs would like to feel they are as this significant to their partner. I like it!

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

An emotional high so many dream of and yet few experience the reality of it.

Posted 4 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lovely poem! Nice rhymes nice rhythm. And best of it it captures that ever illusive love.

Posted 6 Months Ago


Daz

6 Months Ago

Hi. Thanks for taking the time to leave a comment here.
That energy or buzz when we're crushing on someone can really keep us awake at night.
Nice brevity.

Posted 7 Months Ago


Daz

6 Months Ago

I appreciate you taking notice of my writing Ana. This crush theme seems to have taking a life of it.. read more
Papaya

6 Months Ago

My first gold star. What an honour. 🙂💃
This is probably why they were sleepless in Seattle. 💙

Posted 8 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Daz

6 Months Ago

Yes, probably 💙
A nice poem conveying the excitement of love.

Posted 10 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

That is cute.What was the inspiration? I love it.

Posted 10 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Daz

9 Months Ago

I was listening to a Kanye West song from his album, 808's and Heartbreak. There's a line that goes:.. read more
I think we can all relate to this ‘sleepless night’. I admire how you are able to put so much feeling in your words. Great poem!

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Daz

11 Months Ago

Thanks a lot Dara and welcome to my corner of the Cafe! Please feel free have a look and review at s.. read more

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Added on November 5, 2023
Last Updated on January 23, 2024

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Houston , TX



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