Sleepless because of You

More than just a crush

Oh what a rush
More than a crush
What a lucky day
Got me thinking all day
I know you don't know what I'm feeling
Maybe you suspect
In retrospect,
It was meant to be
This way
Sleepless because of you

Author's Note

Reviews

[Ern M. Yoshimoto]

a sharp and straight love letter full of fun rhymes and a good beat. this verse is very relateable and you capture that moment when in this short work. love is the one thing sweeter than dreams, which you expressed so vividly.

[Daz]

Thanks for reviewing.

[Pryde Foltz]

I feel you. Staying up all night with thoughts of one just out of reach. Wonderful write, Daz:)

[Daz]

Yes, telling her how I feel, night or day :) Thanks for your encouraging review. Compliments of the season.

[maya_online]

Though I'm always there for nice long poems, this was short and sweet, and reminds me of a song, great work !

[Daz]

Thanks for your comment.

[ETERNITY]

Hi, I think all gfs or bfs would like to feel they are as this significant to their partner. I like it!

[Chris]

An emotional high so many dream of and yet few experience the reality of it.

[Daz]

Thanks my wise friend.

[A Poor Player]

Lovely poem! Nice rhymes nice rhythm. And best of it it captures that ever illusive love.

[Daz]

Hi. Thanks for taking the time to leave a comment here.

[Papaya]

That energy or buzz when we're crushing on someone can really keep us awake at night.
Nice brevity.

[Daz]

I appreciate you taking notice of my writing Ana. This crush theme seems to have taking a life of it's own though lol. Wasn't my intention but I appreciate you. Let's get that gold star ⭐

[Papaya]

My first gold star. What an honour. 🙂💃