Sleepless because of You

More than just a crush

Oh what a rush
More than a crush
What a lucky day
Got me thinking all day
I know you don't know what I'm feeling
Maybe you suspect
In retrospect,
It was meant to be
This way
Sleepless because of you

Reviews

[maya_online]

Though I'm always there for nice long poems, this was short and sweet, and reminds me of a song, great work !

[Daz]

Thanks for your comment.

[GlendaK]

Hi, I think all gfs or bfs would like to feel they are as this significant to their partner. I like it!

[Chris]

An emotional high so many dream of and yet few experience the reality of it.

[A Poor Player]

Lovely poem! Nice rhymes nice rhythm. And best of it it captures that ever illusive love.

[Daz]

Hi. Thanks for taking the time to leave a comment here.

[Papaya]

That energy or buzz when we're crushing on someone can really keep us awake at night.
Nice brevity.

[Daz]

I appreciate you taking notice of my writing Ana. This crush theme seems to have taking a life of it's own though lol. Wasn't my intention but I appreciate you. Let's get that gold star ⭐

[Papaya]

My first gold star. What an honour. 🙂💃

[Anita Frader]

This is probably why they were sleepless in Seattle. 💙

[Daz]

Yes, probably 💙

[Sharrumkin]

A nice poem conveying the excitement of love.

[Mint Rayne]

That is cute.What was the inspiration? I love it.

[Daz]

I was listening to a Kanye West song from his album, 808's and Heartbreak. There's a line that goes:
Why would she make calls out the blue,
Now I'm awake, sleepless in you"

[Dara]

I think we can all relate to this ‘sleepless night’. I admire how you are able to put so much feeling in your words. Great poem!

[Daz]

Thanks a lot Dara and welcome to my corner of the Cafe! Please feel free have a look and review at some of my older writings. I would really appreciate that.