Sleepless because of You

More than just a crush

Oh what a rush
More than a crush
What a lucky day
Got me thinking all day
I know you don't know what I'm feeling
Maybe you suspect
In retrospect,
It was meant to be
This way
Sleepless because of you

Author's Note

Reviews

[Davidgeo]

This got 2900 views since 2023? Ha... I'm sure those are very legit numbers for this very nuanced and complex piece of writing. Do you really think that's actually productive? Faking views?

This site's algorithm is going to blacklist you if you keep doing it. And you will deserve it.

[Daz]

Not fake at all. Most of those views are from me. I keep reading my stuff like crazy.

[Davidgeo]

Ha... that's how you do it. That is how you should respond to trolls such as myself. Why does no one else here understand this? It's almost as if they enjoy being emotional supply for sociopaths. (some of them do, it's weird... there are some strange people on this site)

[Ern M. Yoshimoto]

a sharp and straight love letter full of fun rhymes and a good beat. this verse is very relateable and you capture that moment when in this short work. love is the one thing sweeter than dreams, which you expressed so vividly.

[Daz]

Thanks for reviewing.

[Pryde Foltz]

I feel you. Staying up all night with thoughts of one just out of reach. Wonderful write, Daz:)

[Daz]

Yes, telling her how I feel, night or day :) Thanks for your encouraging review. Compliments of the season.

[maya_online]

Though I'm always there for nice long poems, this was short and sweet, and reminds me of a song, great work !

[Daz]

Thanks for your comment.

[Glenda]

Hi, I think all gfs or bfs would like to feel they are as this significant to their partner. I like it!

[Chris]

An emotional high so many dream of and yet few experience the reality of it.

[Daz]

Thanks my wise friend.

[A Poor Player]

Lovely poem! Nice rhymes nice rhythm. And best of it it captures that ever illusive love.

[Daz]

Hi. Thanks for taking the time to leave a comment here.

[Papaya]

That energy or buzz when we're crushing on someone can really keep us awake at night.
Nice brevity.

[Daz]

I appreciate you taking notice of my writing Ana. This crush theme seems to have taking a life of it's own though lol. Wasn't my intention but I appreciate you. Let's get that gold star ⭐

[Papaya]

My first gold star. What an honour. 🙂💃