Something Strange

Something Strange

A Poem by Daz

There's something strange 
It's in the atmosphere
Flowing through your bloodstream,
it seems 
Something between me and you 
Can we make the change?
Is it even possible?
In you was a different expression
A strange look
Like you don't recognize me any more
A stranger to you
A touch you don't recognize any more 
Talk to me, Walk with me 
Wanna figure it out
But there's something strange 
It's eating you up inside 
No reason to deny
These strange feelings

© 2024 Daz


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Hi :) I like this poesy, not Evanesence very much, sorry.
Your poetry is in a personal style.
The message is what I would probably say to a person disregarding me.
I'm not expecting an answer.
This is just a review. I liked your piece a lot!

Posted 1 Week Ago


Daz

2 Days Ago

Listen to the albums, "the open door" , and the self titled one "evanescence"
Glenda

2 Days Ago

Sure. I'll check it out. Thanks.
Glenda

2 Days Ago

I have sampled several pieces...Not my style at all. Sorry.
Strange feelings that need definitions but they are undeniably present and powerful, moving perhaps to the hearts and souls. You are no starnger to poetry.

Posted 6 Years Ago


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Added on June 1, 2018
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