Quiet Storm

My attempt at a Haiku.

There's a storm coming
Tall trees swaying in the wind
Gray clouds dim the sky

Reviews

[Cherrie]

Haiku, are graceful and illuminate a single moment and you did that with grace and clearity

[Chris]

You succeeded...

and the words also express many thoughts

[Daz]

Thank you Chris. I have mixed feelings about this one tho, considering the impact the actual storm had on those affected.

[Annette Pisano-Higley]

Perfect 5-7-5...strong imagery of The impending hurricane...nature responding dramatically. Superb!

[Daz]

Thank you Annette!