Dark side of loneliness

A friend said I should write my thoughts down. That it's supposed to be therapy. But for me it's just going back to the misery. When your losing control it's no longer a game. People genuinely start to question maybe something isn't right.

"Maybe you need a change of scenery. Do something you haven't done before"

That's what my friend told me. Bless her heart she means well. I don't think she can help me..

Reviews

[Chris]

Not "random" at all... We "talk" our way through the pains - we don't have to understand them nor how the words ...fit... our view of who and what we are.

[barleygirl]

I very much enjoy your honest observations here, but I definitely wish you could expand this kind of story into something about 3 times as long. I think longer pieces aren't as well-read on a website like this, but I like to read MORE when I come across short short pieces like this.

"But for me it's just going back to the pain" . . . this is the line that makes a reader want to know more. I realize some writers like to plant an idea like this, letting the reader fill in the blanks. But for me, I want to know more about YOUR experiences, not thinking more about mine.

"Do something you haven't done before" is another line that begs to be expanded. Even if the narrator is too "down" to actually DO anything, maybe a little riff on what comes to mind when thinking about doing something new!??!

I have the feeling you are a vessel brimming with good stuff to read, but I feel a bit of reserve from you, as you do not feel totally free to let out all that creativity inside you!?!?! Thanks for sharing!