A Step

It's been a while, but this overcame me once when I was in a meditative mood

A room of green for what to show

A mere projection of things to come.

In spirit and arms I embraced the light.

Granted to see in the Almighty's sight.

A wonderous future that was charted out.

Knowledge from the midst of chaos seen.

The window to dawn of new age, came the birth of new me.

One in spirit and in person.

Speaker of the Lord for this world.

To spread a message of undying peace,

Love thy neighbor and make thy peace.

Though one sees so highly of himself,

Champion the success of others too.

Message of pure description this is.

See through the masked mess of what is,

Reveal to yourself a truth unveiled,

Historic light shall then prevail.

Above the skies and past the sun,

A corner in the Lord's domain we shall run,

Come to see the tree of knowledge.

The fruit that ripen bring success.

Ideas anew meant to change the old.

To bring about a far spiritual world.

Where people enjoy their God-given riches.

In spite of what may now be empty ditches.

Engage the mind in something brighter,

Become one of the Lord's candle lighters.

Reviews

[Syke]

I can't offer any edits, or anything. I can't say anything to improve, it's just, it's good. It's deep and powerful, it connects at some level. I like it, I really like it. It's, it's a bit confusing, it meanders and wanders, it touches and manages to surpass the words, it ascends, it is good. The words manage to barely contain the meaning they are supposed to convey.