What I want  (Parisian Gold Fish dub)

What I want (Parisian Gold Fish dub)

A Poem by add459
"

Thinking about what makes a poem great

"

What I want  (Parisian Gold Fish dub)

 

If poetry is not

Tactile

Lush as the

zoological parade

delicious

as rain in the sun

Visceral

Like cutting into an onion

It is not great

 

It must

drip from the page

So that you pause and assess its

Images

And sensation

 

It must forgo argument

And use that which is deeper

Than argument

 

© 2010 add459


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Added on July 8, 2010
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Author

add459
add459

denton, TX



About
trying to write poetry, grad student more..

Writing
on death on death

A Poem by add459