HourGlass Fate

New Song! Rock!!! I find as people we can be very impatient with life, and we let it get to us. Very seldom do we realize we are actually in control of our own fate and our own time.

 HourGlass Fate

 

Stop thinking

Stop waiting

Stop holding

On let go

 

Stop dreaming

Stop being 

So impatient

 

Just go

Go 

Go 

 

Stop living life with an hourglass fate

Stop giving up it’s never too late

Stop holding on to your tries that have failed and gone

Time ain’t never running out till you open its gate

 

Stop  wishing

Stop missing

Stopped missions

Let go

 

Stop fighting

Stop crying 

Just rise above

 

And go

Go 

Go

 

Stop living life with an hourglass fate

Stop giving up it’s never too late

Stop holding on to your tries that have failed and gone

Time ain’t never running out till you open its gate

 

Stop holding on to what’s keeping you  frightened 

Stop staring at it, see a mountain you climb it

Stop holding on to your loves that have lived and sailed away

Time ain’t never running out till you open its gate

 

Stop losing

Stop choosing

To stop trying

 

Just rise

Rise

Rise

 

Stop living life with an hourglass fate

Stop giving up it’s never too late

Stop holding on to your tries that have failed and gone

Time ain’t never running out till you open its gate

 

Stop holding on to what’s keeping you frightened

Stop staring at it, see a mountain you climb it

Stop holding on to your loves that have lived and sailed away

Time ain’t never running out....

 

Stop living life with an hourglass fate

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

It works marvelously with the music...don't know how well it reads. Let me know, if you will! Thanks!

Reviews

[Jeberle]

Since I haven't heard the music, I can only comment on it as a poem, not as a song. As a poem, I felt that the idea of an "hourglass fate" was underdeveloped. You could take it in so many directions, but all you had was the repetition in the refrain. You might consider adding some more imagery dealing with hourglasses and sand and time running out, etc. or you could write another stanza or two to flesh out this idea.

Well done. Keep up the good work.

[L.G. Knight]

ok since I have heard the music...sort of... I can say that it sings better than it reads... Though the reading is not too bad just kind of repetitive.... but yea Since i have heard it sang I will say FABulous job sir!

~Frances~

[Deborah Leah Krempa]

Sounds like a good song. Nice lyrics. Thank you for sharing. Debileah