Back To Where I Started

Attempt at a Haiku, ending of the "My Favorite Part", "Since I'm Being Honest", "Back To Where I Started" trilogy.

"Back where I started,

Place that was condemned to past.

Only need your love."

Reviews

[L.G. Knight]

This was a wonderful first try with deep meaning.... Each line is one syllable too long though =)

"Back where I started,

Place that was condemned to past.

Only need your love."

Try that it keeps the same strong meaning and message with one less syllable per line.... Awesome first try at a haiku.... Did you check out the acrostic I sent you? Once you get the syllables fixed try entering it in a haiku contest.

told you that you could do it.... its a challenge to get so much meaning in a couple syllables huh? Hope this helps!

~Frances~

P.S. I love you Main!

[Travis Lawrence]

This reminds me of cycles. Life is nothing but circles, it seems! Great write for something so short, seriously, powerful.

-Travis

[Aries]

Frances said it all....There's nothing left except...You are a very talented writer....keep it up~~