her smile

her smile

A Poem by Frozen Alone
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i have a friend who is always sad and i was thinking of her when i wrote this

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the world seems to stand still
when that girl begins to cry
the tear drops ring thru the hills
the birds feel no reason to fly
but when this girl starts to smile
and the world begins to move again
it makes the pain all worth while
and when the sunrise begins
it sees that smile and runs away
not because it was scared
but because it was ashamed
cus it saw how her smile flared
and the world will never be the same

© 2009 Frozen Alone


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This is a great poem about having a crush on a girl. It also tell that is just making liking someone all worth while!

Posted 15 Years Ago


great loved it..

Posted 15 Years Ago


HEY!!! i read this in school!! ..



i still love it at home too!

Posted 15 Years Ago



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Added on January 22, 2009

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Frozen Alone
Frozen Alone

corning, AR



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im an athlete, kinda smart, and loves to write. im 5'9and 165 pounds im not a small guy ive been writing for a while but never thought i was good so im using this site as a constructive critisim be ho.. more..

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