This is an interesting poem, with a bit of dreamy twist. The only thing I feel the need to bring up is that some of the lines could have been a bit smoother. Paragraphs four, six, and seven were a bit hard to read with their choppy rhythms. Still, it was a fun poem.
This is a great write. Love is a hard thing to describe and it's what sometimes give us strength to go on. It is true that love hurts but it also repairs! Thanks for sharing this great piece!
This. is. amazing. I love it!
A lot of emotion put in a short, but well written poem.
(that's what I try to do also)
I love your stanza "My pen is my Sword, My paper, my Shield.
Very nice job.
-Rachael