Unexpected Trouble, Unexpected JoyA Story by A.W. Carllight, hopefully funny story. Still a work in progress.
Whether it was mud or crap smeared all over my face, at that point, I didn’t even care. My dress suit had been turned into a swimsuit. I was swimming in my own sweat; the result of searching for seven little devils around the amazon rainforest. Leaves coated my hair, branches left their signatures in the holes in my shirt. Mud consumed my entire body. The boys stood together, stiff as the trees that surrounded them. Keeping their heads low, the guilt permeated from their eyes and into the hot, shifty air. And rightfully so.
My
dinner date was at seven. I was picking my little brother and his friends up
from the local park at six. That should have left me plenty of time to pick the
boys up, return home, and get ready. Making it to the date on time would be no
problem. I’m not one to take chances though. I was dressed and ready by 5:30. I paced the kitchen
floor, sporting my brand new suit for the very first time. Every 30 seconds or
so, I would peek at myself in the kitchen mirror just to make sure every little
detail was perfect. Tie straightened, pants tucked in, hair tightly wound. This
was my first date with Hannah and I wasn’t about to blow it. Every detail
mattered. It took me a whole month just to get up the confidence to ask her
out.
I
arrive at the park at 5:45, just hoping that the boys are ready and waiting. Of
course, they’re not. They are off roaming in the woods, doing whatever 8-10
year old boys do. It hits 6 o’clock and
the boys are still nowhere to be seen. My heart sinks. I’m a worrier and God
has a strange humor. I seem to be the butt of many of his jokes. 6:10 rolls around and I
decide I am not going to wait any longer. I get out of the car and start to
yell for the boys. People in the parking lot give me dirty looks as I scream
out the boys’ names. At this point I am panicking. My forehead begins to drip
sweat, suddenly my tie seems to be a bit too tight.
6:20
rolls around and I am beyond pissed. I’m throwing blame around in my head as I
sit slumped over on the parking lot curb. I am certainly blaming the boys for
having no regard for my life. I go as far as calling this, “the worst night of
my life”. I blame my dad for not picking up these stupid boys himself. “What am
I, his personal slave?” I complain like a moody teenager who was about to miss
his date. That’s exactly what I was.
6:30 rolls around and my mindset shifts. I begin to worry about the boys and their safety. All the worst case scenarios run through my head. “Eaten by a bear? Captured by indigenous peoples?” A rush of responsibility and heroism enters my veins. Worrying about Hannah takes a back seat for a moment. I rush into the woods, determined. I search far and wide yet cannot find the boys. I scurry through the thick forest brush, dodging branches of trees and hopping over puddles of mud. No sign of the boys. After a long, arduous
search, I hear boys laughing in the distance. I recognize the voices. Robotically,
I dart towards the voices. I peek through the leaves only to find the boys
gathered in a clearing. They are hooting and hollering, chanting like baboons
as they dance around in large circle. One member is in the center, sitting
Indian style with his legs folded over. I break out of the brush and into the
clearing. All of their eyes go to me, then back to each other. I stand still,
anticipating what the boys will do. Time stood still. I was waiting for some
type of explanation. Anything.
The
boys suddenly spring into more yelling and rush over to me, grabbing me with
surprising strength for 10 year old boys. They supplant me in the center of
their circle. More chanting ensues as they dance around me. I was in shock. I
went from being James Bond on the rescue mission, to being Piggy from Lord of
the Flies. I was being humiliated. By little boys. In the woods. In a suit.
While the most beautiful girl in the world was waiting for me… Once
the shock factor wore off, I put my big boy pants on and restored order. I said
some things to those boys that I can’t repeat now. All you need to know is that
the boys cooled the jets on the Navajo Show quickly. Soon enough I had them
marching back to the parking lot in an orderly fashion. According
to my father, the boys were doing a “standard boy scout ritual”.
Anyways,
I show up to the restaurant 30 minutes late after dropping the boys off. My
dress suit looks more like a Ghillie Suit. I’m covered in everything you could
possibly find in the woods. I rush through the front doors and there she is, looking
absolutely perfect, sitting at a table flipping through her menu like nothing
was wrong. She glances up for a moment, seeing me enter. She begins to laugh
uncontrollably at my ridiculous appearance, but in an adorable, endearing way.
For the first time, I loosen up, and crack a guilty smile.
We
still enjoyed a wonderful meal together that night. The restaurant workers
asked me to leave immediately because of my attire, so we enjoyed a “fancy”
date at the McDonald’s down the street.
Overall,
Hannah handled it great. She forgave me and was very understanding and sweet.
We actually went on many more dates, in which I was always on time. The only
thing is that she still loves to tell that story. In fact, it has become our kids’
favorite bedtime story. © 2016 A.W. CarlAuthor's Note
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StatsAuthorA.W. CarlWildwood, MOAboutWe don't need smarter people in the world, we need more passionate people. Deeper people. I want my writing to cause the reader to ask important questions that have answers that matter. more..Writing
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