Cycle.

a visually experimental poem

i'm 

lost

afraid

alone

w

     o 

        r

              r

                   i

                        e

                               d

the facade i put on shows me as

silly

happy

glad

positive

no one looks past it

no one cares to

so i'm stuck. in a constant

c

e          y

l   c

but i'm used to it.

so i 

.......

......

...

..

.

march on

Author's Note

just an idea.
meh.

Reviews

[Jesse Lancaster]

I love it. This was f*****g fantabulous idea. This is THE bomb-diggity. Honestly. The colours kind of took away from it in my opinion, but that's not the focus. The visual aspect of the poem really sealed the deal and the pause at the end leading to "march on", though small, had a big effect on me. Seriously just made my day. Well written, relatable, creative.

[Angel Bluestocking]

great write.

[Scallywagg]

I enjoyed the visual effect on this piece, it was far more fun than black on White and down the screen.
It cheered me up and felt like it had movement.I felt it fitted your words well and even enhanced them. Thank you

[ALEW]

I love the use of visuals. This is really relatable, and concrete. Well expressed.