Bloom

Just another amaetur love poem.

When you think of flowers 

blooming you think of the 

stages they have to go through-

toget to the point of being 

admired by rhe world, even 

captivating a lover's eye-

as if it is waiting to be plucked and cherished eagerly.

But the ones I cherish

bloom in my heart. You planted 

them there so unexpectedly.

From a seed, you planted an idea.

From a sprout, you guided me to reach 

towards the sky. You water

me daily, feed my soul, nuture my 

sprouts- encouraging me to 

grow strong and tall.

And when I am resilient to 

all weather conditions-

I bloom.

I transition into the best version of myself.

And when winter comes and 

withers me away- I come 

back again, each version better than the last. 

You are the curator to the 

garden of my soul- I will

always appreciate your decision to choose me

to plant  as your beautiful garden. 

Reviews

[willweb]

Just another amateur love poem" should read, Just another beautifully written amateur love poem"
This felt very good to read today, a wonderful tribute to the one who has taken your heart and nurtured it to bloom the most amazingly fragrant flower. Really nice.

[aculotta21]

Aww thank you that was sweet. I'm happy about the love I have too

[jacob erin-cilberto]

I find this poem touching and full of gratitude.
Make sure to proofread...that will eliminate typos.
but a good poem.

[AYVID N]

A very touching poem. I can feel the sheer gratitude in these words. The analogy of the garden, the seed and sapling is beautiful and it spoke to me of devotion and dedication in love. A garden blooms only with patience and the labor of love. I pray this garden always flourishes, never withers.

[aculotta21]

Wow thank you so much for your feedback. My lovely wife inspired me to write this in less than five munites. She is what keeps me going, my muse, so thank you for your kind words they mean a lot! I tend to gravitate towards writing about nature I guess its my thing.

[Serendipity Planet]

You have your speaicl style, I love reading your poems
They always powerful and emotional as poetry should be

[aculotta21]

Thank you so much you are too kind. Seaglass is my personal favorite check that one out if you haven't. What is yourfavorite poem you think you've writen and posted so far?

[Ursa major]

I admire this poem. Flowers are we all, Coming back to blooming bigger, brighter, and more powerful each time. Beautifully written
Love it!

[aculotta21]

Thank you so much for your feedback it really means a lot., I am new to poetry and ifyou want chceck out my other works. I have another poem also referencing nature such as the ocean and another garden one. I will do the same and view your work too! Thanks so much friend

[Ursa major]

I will definitely check it out! Nature and the forest is where I thrive.

[Chris Shaw]

A lovely poem with good use of metaphor. Pleased I stopped by today. Thanks for posting.

[aculotta21]

No, thank you for reading and stopping by. Your feedback and opinion means a lot to me so thank you so much for your kind words! I am happy that I made you enjoy your visit onto my page, and yes that metaphor is one I adore using. Thanks for stopping by and best wishes.

[Chris Shaw]

Thank you. You are welcome.

[Relic]

Ths is really good. I'm sure every word comes from the bottom of your heart, too. I like the metaphor you've given as a theme as its easy to understand. Check your spelling.

Great poem. :)

[aculotta21]

thank you so much and I am so glad you noticed every word that did come from my heart and soul. Thanks for the spellcheck, I was typing a little too fast trying to spill it out on the page, I made some corrections. Happy to have your feedback and thanks for commenting.