Seaglass

Heart beating so fast-

You make my palms sweaty

Your love grants me peace.

With you I can change

My world-simply because

My perspective of the world

Has changed.

I see it clearly like the sea

Glass on the ocean floor.

I wonder how long it took

For it to get where it needed

To be �"

Making it so beautiful

The ocean helped make it that way-

Guiding the change.

Your love is my ocean. 

Reviews

[willweb]

This is beautiful, I love the message this expresses, it felt very good to read. My only suggestion...lower case where it should be, the upper case following/continued lines are just a bit distracting. But, your talent for wonderful poetry shines in this,

[aculotta21]

Hello-

Thank you so much for your feedback wow it means a lot. I am not really a writer and only have written a few poems in mylife and I just wanted to see if anyone would read them. Thank you somuch for your feedback and I will gladly take it into consideration. Sorry about all the continued lines, it might have something to do with the fact i uploaded this from a word doc on my laptop. Thank you so much. -Anna

[willweb]

No problem, just hoping to help and let me say, welcome to WC.

[aculotta21]

Thank you for the warm welcome, I am in the proess of uploading a few more poems I have stashed away. Also I must say, I read some of your work and I enjoyed the poem about childhood memories, when I read it you made me feel like I was a kid again. Keep up the good work! And nice rhymes.