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The poem is about a rascued soul , the person was lost inside the dark world, but was saved by a humble heart, simple and scarce nowadays.

You Came in my dismay.

Gave me your support.

With this thy rare.

Humble, simple and expensive.

Way of being in this world so stiff

To find a heart so pure.

Author's Note

Help me out if something is not connecting to the poem, feel free to review and rate, Thanks in advance

Reviews

[Tate Morgan]

I felt the same thing expensive is out of place a different word would be much more appropriate

[David Wesley]

I feel like the word, "expensive" is out of place in this piece.

Not sure why.

[Rahul]

simplicity floats on your words. great job.

[Acucena G.]

Thank you Jayker

[Kristin Lee]

This one holds relative simplicity in its few words, but its meaning is very deep. Finding a tender heart to share or guide us through our darker moments is indeed a rare thing. Nice write up.

[Acucena G.]

Thank you Kristin

[Baby Ricochet]

Beautiful photo and poem

[Acucena G.]

Thank you Ricochet

[Imara]

I like the meaning someone who is heart broken and she finds support where she never expected it to come from and is shocked by the kindness. But I am curious as to why this line is the way it is "Humble, simple and expensive." It's mostly the last word that I don't understand, if you're trying to express that this is a loving, kind person then why is this person expensive?
Other than that I think this is a sweet poem about finding good people unexpectedly when you need them the most. Good Job :)

[Acucena G.]

What a question we have there Imara, but its expensive in a metaphoric way , its npt saying that the,person is expensive, what is expensive there is the kindness, good will, honesty, humbleness, there are things tht seems expensive nowadays, not expensive because we have to buy it, but because hearts and kindness that are humans and real are extint . Don't you agree?

[Imara]

Ah I see now! That makes sense, a unique way to put it :)
I don't know honestly, I think a lot of the human population is wrapped up in themselves but then again a lot of us are good kind people. I try to surround myself with those kinds of people and I've never found a shortage of good people. You just have to know where to look yknow?

[Acucena G.]

Yes,I have to look properly.

[Sami Khalil]

A wonderful poem to say the least...:)

[Acucena G.]

thank you my friend

[Sami Khalil]

My pleasure...:)

[Jack...]

Beautiful my good friend. Taking another's hand and helping them walk through the darkness. You do have a good heart my friend.

[Acucena G.]

I am glad you liked it, JACK .

[quinfinn]

it is, indeed, rare to find a pure heart, one which is willing to nurture and rescue another soul. this is a very good piece of writing. your subject matter is great but the expression is real and honest. well done!

[Acucena G.]

Thank you very much quinfinn

[quinfinn]

always welcome