Dark Love

Its about a person whom have given the love to a lover , but the lover did not return the love.

Love made me see .

How is the feeling of being rejected.

Let my being devastated .

You have awaken the beast inside me.

Couldn’t avoid the impact

Of what you have done to my heart

Author's Note

I hope you comment and give your opnion , don't forget to rate, thank you in advance.

Reviews

[Riley Bray]

This seems to be a different genre than I have come accustomed to viewing on your page, and quite the successful have at it as well. The only problems I detected were small and of the grammar type. You may view my thoughts below:

How is the feeling of being rejected.--------how the feeling of being rejected is
Let my being devastated .------------------------left my being devastated
You have awaken the beast inside me.-------you have awakened the beast inside me
Couldn’t avoid the impact-------------------------one that couldnt avoid the impact
Of what you have done to my heart------------from what you have done to my heart

Overall great poem Acucena, as always!

[Coyote Poetry]

I like the direct and honest words. Photo gave life to the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[*Clare*]

I have felt this! Most of the time this certain type of emotion is what inspires me to write.. I like Dark love. Good stuff:)

[David Wesley]

Dark. I wonder, is there any inkling of revenge or hope? Especially with the "beast".

[Baby Ricochet]

Love is an evil game with high stakes. Good little poem.

[Kristin Lee]

Oh the devestation of rejection! A very strightforward take on the plights of a breakup, and yet the way you wield the words, "beast," "impact," and "rejection" they hold way more power than 6 lines look like they should. Well done.

[Frieda P]

I think we've all felt this beast, some in more ways than one, the aftermath can be like an Apocalypse, some don't ever recover, nicely pen'd.

[Acucena G.]

Thank you FRIEDA.

[Jack...]

My friend, thank you for inviting me to read your fine poem. I have felt this pain many times before, but I react differently than most and can happily say that I am still friends with every woman I have ever been involved with, regardless of how it ended. Very nice my friend.

[Acucena G.]

Yeah its hard to face, but the life doesn't stop and if we stop we will never be happy. Thank you JACK very much.

[Sami Khalil]

A one-way street love is very hard. You have penned a good poem on this subject...:)

[Acucena G.]

Thank you for reading and commenting SAMI KHALIL

[Sami Khalil]

My pleasure...Any time...:)

[quinfinn]

unrequited love....i am far too learned on this subject. you handle it with kid gloves, very personal and yet, distantly. i love the emotions of this piece, and the portrait is beautiful.....well penned!

[Acucena G.]

I think that we all have had that moment and even though the pain tht it caused us, we moved on . I am glad you liked it qUINFINN

[quinfinn]

immensely