Generosity

Its a poem which reflects the first moment a person find love and have a relationship with the lover .

First came your charm

which  brought a lot of happiness

when I was in my corner

Saved by your generosity

I want to feel natural when

you get closer

I feel safe when you are near 

Protected I am when you give me a powerful hug

Joy is what your presence brings me

Acucena G.

Author's Note

I hope you read and give your opinion

Reviews

[Riley Bray]

I myself have not found someone with whom this feeling sticks, but I do understand it. I must say that I enjoyed how you added the picture at the very beginning, and it was quite a good choice at that. What I must say, though, is I feel like this isn't a finished poem. It seems as if it stops right in the middle of a thought, and because of that I urge you to expand upon the poem. A nice go overall, though. :)

[Baby Ricochet]

Nice

[Acucena G.]

Thank you

[Jessica Gillitzer]

This is uplifting, makes me feel kind of loved. i know it's not for me but that is what I get from it. < 3 you are a warm heart and a wonderful writer. i love saved by your generosity, it seems sometimes that is all that saves us.
< 3 Jessie

[Acucena G.]

Thank you very much for your kind words

[Jessica Gillitzer]

deserved words =oD
< 3

[Acucena G.]

muah

[Jessica Gillitzer]

*mwah* hehe
< 3

[Acucena G.]

lol

[Sami Khalil]

A good one...Well written...:)

[Acucena G.]

Thank you for reading SAMI

[Sami Khalil]

My pleasure...:)

[Acucena G.]

(@7@)

[Sami Khalil]

^^~^^ :)

[zainul]

Very genuine thought.
Yes,the first moment a person find love and have a relationship with the lover may be an example of generosity.
But,this generosity should be mutual.A favor of love from each partner.
Reflects a true feeling.
Thanks for sharing :)

[Acucena G.]

Yes but its hard to have a mutual generosity , its not impossible though , thanks for reading

[zainul]

:)