Something Different

The poem is about experiencing new things, its about loosing yourself for a while and find the hidden you that is prepared to live new things without fear.

"Something Different "

Make me live something different

Let me see something different

Let me learn something different

Let me do something different

Make me feel something different

Make me hear something different

Let me sing something different

Let me imagine something different

Make me dream something different

Make me laugh over something different

Let me think different

Let me love something different

Make me touch something different

Make me desire something different

Let me suffer something different

Let me be something different.

Acucena G.

Author's Note

its really hard when you are lfacing a hard time in your to change the game, the poem show that we can try to experience new things instead of being holding the suffering that your world have become.

Reviews

[Girl Friday (Sarah W.)]

I love the idea of this write...the way that we all wish to be something different than what we have ourselves. We look around us and see different lives, different bodies, different, cars, dogs, houses...and we want change. I don't think humans are meant to be sedintary creatures; we are nomads by nature, striving to be that which we are not...continually. Keep exploring!

[Acucena G.]

Great comment ah, I think you should write something about that too. Thanks for reading Sarah

[Baby Ricochet]

Variety is the spice of life. Good poem

[Acucena G.]

Thank you very much

[Sami Khalil]

Awesome poem and idea...Great job...:)

[Acucena G.]

Thank you Sami

[Sami Khalil]

My pleasure...:)

[RobbedByGreed]

A very different piece, if I can borrow the word. Interesting and worded thoughtfuly, but without car. It was as if I were reading my own thoughts...

Well done :)

---RbG

[Acucena G.]

Thank you RBG , of course you can borrow the word.

[.Em.]

very nice .. great poem... its like a flowing of the wind.. wishes in the wind taken away to hopefully come true

[Acucena G.]

Thank you for reading and commenting

[Jayden Ireton]

I really like this free spirit feel. I felt comfortable with the repetition. Great piece.

[Acucena G.]

Thank you very much Justin Ireton

[Chris]

We live as we can - seldom as we want.

[Acucena G.]

indeed Chris, best wishes

[Jack...]

Well this is certainly different, my friend. :)

Indeed you are correct, we need to look farther than just the end of our noses, there's an entire world out there waiting for us. Nice

[Acucena G.]

Thank you my friend.

[Syble]

I really like this poem! Loved the flow and its definitely something that most people can identify with. I know I can.
P.S. Check out lines 10 & 11 at your own discretion :) Great read!!

[Acucena G.]

Thank you Syble , you review was really helpfull.

[Softly McCane]

Amazing insight, especially to suffer different! You're a star!

[Acucena G.]

Thank you for reading , what a beautifull words

[Acucena G.]

you are also a star, because one atar recognizes another one