Oliver

Oliver

A Story by ACOUSTICSHOE

While his mother slept, Oliver-as would most boys of seven-hid in a closet. There, by the light from under the door, he discovered a Mason jar beneath several musty afghans. His mom used these jars to can pickled eggs and homemade preserves. This jar contained something different suspended in clear liquid-more baby bird than human. It was mostly bulbous gray head. Lidless purple eyes. Holes where ears should've been. Translucent fingers like tiny caterpillars. Between its legs, the node of a penis.

Oliver tucked the jar under the afghans. He had a little brother on the way. 

 

© 2008 ACOUSTICSHOE


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Grotesquely interesting.

Posted 16 Years Ago


Wow. Another awesome writing.

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Added on November 23, 2008

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I have been a writer all of my life and probably in other lives as well. I'm not sure how it began, I honestly think I was born this way as I think every writer is. Just born that way. You cannot lear.. more..

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