I was always opposed to the term, "X-mas," due to the fact that it truly does take "Christ" out of "Christmas." During the Holiday season, we can't even say "Christmas" anymore. It's always "Happy Holidays." We need to remember our Lord Jesus Christ, and the suffering He endured for us all. Even if one isn't Christian, I believe Christmas is a celebration for all, and, most of all, a celebration of Jesus Christ, the Son of God.
Thank you for submitting this to my Christmas contest! Very well written! Interesting though - using the corss rather than a tree... a blending of two things in one, don't you think? Again, thank you for submitting this!
Good poem.
The blend of old colloquialisms (is that the right word?) and more down-to-earth speech went for a nice touch.
But I think you spelled Cocoa wrong, even if you were spelling Cacao. Ha ha.
I love writing ( of course! ) I also love music. Right now, I'm working on a book about a kid who realizes he has to break a curse, and the only way he can do that is enter a different world. I hope y.. more..