Seltzer Water

Seltzer Water

A Poem by golden
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Learning how to love when you only want to push people away.

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It’s good for stains, it takes the dirt right out.

I close the top.

Clean.

But you don’t feel this BURSTING inside me!  

Bubble.

Scrub.

Bubble.

Floating to the top.

BURST.

Falling into you.

© 2017 golden


Author's Note

golden
Inspired by bad laundry advice.

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Carbonating out the stains of a bad relationship only washes evidence from the surface – inner tarnish takes longer! Strong imagery, flow and combination of words – very nice read! :-)

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

golden

7 Years Ago

I agree! Thanks for reading :)

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Added on August 14, 2017
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Tags: love, trust, issue, imperfectlyperfect, bubbles

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