7 hours

7 hours

A Poem by Sammi

7 hours.
7 hours I was up last night.
7 hours I was up last night talking.
7 hours I was up last night talking to her.
7 hours I was up last night talking to her until her dad came home.
7 hours I was up last night talking to her until her dad came home so that she wouldn't kill herself.

 

7 hours saved her life.

© 2011 Sammi


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The repetition is effective.

Good structure.

Posted 6 Years Ago
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okay if this is factual wow and great for the both of you that she has a friend like you. as far as a poem goes this is very creative! love the style and wow does it flow!!! excellent write

Posted 13 Years Ago
Powerful!

Posted 13 Years Ago

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 Added on March 17, 2011
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Sammi
Sammi

Doncaster, Yorkshire, United Kingdom



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