musical possession

i hear the music posses me
taking my soul making it free
pulling me from my stance
giving me just one chance

To want something so much more
then what this world has in store
i feel the music grow in power
as it echoes with each waxing hour

feel it rise and fall
till there is nothing at all
but its sweet beautiful sound
pulling my feet off the ground

with this music i can fly
and if it ever stops i will surely die
for the distance i will fall
will make me wish i had never heard it at all


 

Reviews

[Cotton Ball]

'taking my sould making it free' I love that line. It seems that it doesn't matter whether it is music created in the studio or between two people, no matter who you are, what life throws at you or where you are going music has some power over you.
:]

[NinjaPi]

this has such an amazing truth to it. you have described man relationship to music perfectly. not to mention your amazing rhyming skills. nice poem.

[there is no more from m..]

this is an amazing poem i love it :)

[Elizabeth]

Wow this is amazing. I love the last line, this perfectly describes the way people react to music. Well done.