How do I love you

i love you between every breath
i love you between every beat
i love you from head to feet
i love you from life to death

i love you for your glance
i love you for your hair
i love you for your stare
i love you for your advance

i love you with every kiss
i just wish i had told you this

 

Reviews

[Matthew Ian Herrawood W]

hmmm very interesting feel. i like it. alot of the other poems entered in the contest didnt say what i wanted them to this is the first one that ive read that really hit the nail on the head in the sense that it expresses just how much you love this person. its very good.

[Abigail]

I love this. I'ts amazing I feel like a lot of people can relate to this

[Deaths Cold Kiss]

beautiful write

[Micco Gibson]

This poem is so simple, and I think that's what makes it so great. It flows naturally, and it's a nice change of pace from the complex poems that others write. Good poem, hope you win that contest!

[deeps]

This is so wonderful, such an enjoyable read.
Flows wonderful!

[GoodIntentiionz]

It flows very nicely, pronounces itself clearly and the rhyming was a "good" form of different :)

Great job. Very nice style for your topic, it went well.

[Tayler]

Oh wow this is beautiful! Flows nicely and speaks clearly. This is a lovely write :)

[Bella Luna]

I absolutely adored every line of this poem. The rhyme scheme was different and well needed. I haven't read something so simple, with underlying complexity in such a long time. I thank you for this.