The broken way

Out the door to never return
As my chest seem to burn
In the place where my heart lied
Feels as though I will die

But I will carry on
Learn to be strong
Not matter how it pains me
I will be free

I wont let u control my heart
Even if I have to break it apart

 

Reviews

[TheActOfRandomness(:]

Very small, but it is more powerful than anything.
Good Job(:

[BoSweets]

Straight to the point.. Peace BoSweets

[Elanra]

very simple and equally striking... Like a punch in the face. Good job.

[SilentDreamer]

Cute and simply blunt. I like it, it flows well. Great job.

[Tayler]

I really enjoyed this, it's speaks the truth and the point is easy to pick up on. This is a good write :)