Element Haiku

Wind, Water, Fire...

Glorious sweeping
Revolving, rotating life
Invisible arms

Luscious cascading
Tickling flesh with droplets
Fluid abundance

Crackling power
Unapologetically
Life resets once more

Reviews

[Rana Adalwolfa Simon]

Nicely done. This feels very traditional for haiku, with very eloquent wording to create a subtle but powerful image.

It looks like there's a little typo - third line of second haiku, fluid is misspelled. Look forward to reading more of your work. :)

[Amanda Richelle]

Thank you so much for the feedback! I appreciate your time, kind words and spell check!😊

[Rana Adalwolfa Simon]

You bet! :) Glad to be of help. I have a few pieces which I'm looking for some critique on, if you get some spare time. ;)