Third Eye

Third Eye

A Poem by Amanda Richelle

The third eye is never blind,
But it can be confined-
Rattling the cage,
Built by rage-
Fogging the mirror,
Reflecting fear-
Corroding the bonds,
Of experiences far gone-
Altering the path,
Of orchestrated wrath-
Never blind,
Guiding mankind

© 2015 Amanda Richelle


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One thing that really grabbed my attention about this poem is how the title says: "Third eye"
It's never blind and always watches guiding man kind.
I like the concept of it.
The poem has a really good flow and rhyme too, which makes it enjoyable to read.
Awesome work!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Amanda Richelle

9 Years Ago

Thank you so much for the feedback!! I appreciate you taking the time to read and comment :)
Lizardo

9 Years Ago

You're welcome!



Reviews

One thing that really grabbed my attention about this poem is how the title says: "Third eye"
It's never blind and always watches guiding man kind.
I like the concept of it.
The poem has a really good flow and rhyme too, which makes it enjoyable to read.
Awesome work!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Amanda Richelle

9 Years Ago

Thank you so much for the feedback!! I appreciate you taking the time to read and comment :)
Lizardo

9 Years Ago

You're welcome!

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Added on February 22, 2015
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Amanda Richelle
Amanda Richelle

Kansas City, MO



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I am an introspective biographer (meaning I like to journal...) I have always enjoyed writing poetry, but have had resistance to sharing. My goal here is to share ideas, and any feedback on making tho.. more..

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