True Love Comes To Those With Open Eyes

A poem I wrote for my friend and his girlfriend when they went through a rough time. :)

She says she's weak.
She says she's hurt.
Claims she has no one.
Blind eyes fade the vision of what's real.
For her, I'll always be there.

She says I'm not enough.
She tries to push me away.
Claims I'm not right for her.
Blind eyes fade the vision of what's real.
For her, I'll always be there.

She seeks comfort from another.
She finds herself heartbroken yet again.
Claims she's okay and will remain strong.
Blind eyes fade the vision of what's real.
For her, I'll always be there.

She says she's confused.
She says she doesn't know what she wants.
Claims that I may hurt her like the others.
Blind eyes fade the vision of what's real.
For her, I'll always be there.

She weeps for hours.
She asks herself if she's even good enough for anyone.
Claims she has nobody to hold her.
Blind eyes fade the vision of what's real.
For her, I'll always be there.

She says she's not good enough for me.
She thinks she should just remain alone.
Claims she doesn't want me to end up like her.
Blind eyes fade the vision of what's real.
For her, I'll always be there.

She pushes me away with her tear-soaked hands.
She tells me to leave and continue on with my life.
Claims I could be happier without her.
Blind eyes fade the vision of what's real.
For her, I'll always be there.

I step closer to show her I won't leave her side.
I embrace her with love and care.
Claim I want nothing but her.
Clear eyes reveal the vision of what's real.
For her, I'll always be there.

She cries, tears of happiness and confusion roll down her cheeks.
She whispers love in return in my hold.
Claims she'll do her best to return the happiness.
Clear eyes reveal the vision of what's real.
For me, she'll always be there.

Reviews

[Brianna Brie]

Brody, I am surprised that this one does not have a review yet. It is rather good. I really, really hate repetitive lines in poetry, but I have to say this works. The repetitive lines are strong ones. I enjoyed reading your poem. Thanks for sharing with us.

[Brody Lyons]

Thank you very much, Brianna! :D I'm happy to see people are actually viewing my writing. Haha. I aim to write more, but sometimes it takes a while to come up with things, y'know. Hope you have a nice day!