"Poem in a poem ~ Love indeed "

"Poem in a poem ~ Love indeed "

A Poem by Vivek K. Tiwari
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Two running thoughts in my mind I am sharing in one ...

"
The sadness you bring in me ,
You yourself drag it away,
With the games we play with "LOVE"
You come to my heart ,

The way you whispher "I LOVE YOU, BABY",
I dive in the flow of your love ,
With my heart out and eyes popped at you ,

The things i actly do wrong to make you feel my love
stupidly ,
You laugh a lot at my sweet stupidity ,
Which i like the most ,

The thoughts now travelled my mind:

"We never walked by holding hands ,
We never hugged hard ,
We never crossed our fingers
We never shared the same bit of icecreams
together ,

But even a single tears of your's ,
Make me feel low enough ,
The whisphers of our love surrounds ,
Making my best to take you back "

Now the reality you actually do ,

The punishments you give to yourself,
Pains much to me by seeing you doing so ,
With the random cuts you make on your hands ,
The blood you loose and pain you get,
Leading to sadness all you go ,

But a smile you make ,
The sourness of mine you decrease ,
And the goodness in you increase ,
The thing i like is goodness in you and smile with
cunning eyes at me,

So please my sweety baby, smile always
Your smile glows other life .

#VivekKTiwari

© 2013 Vivek K. Tiwari


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Vivek K. Tiwari
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this is a lovely ode to love


Posted 11 Years Ago


Vivek K. Tiwari

11 Years Ago

Thanks sivan ...
You have this thing in your writing.. sort of like realism.. which is really nice, so keep up the good work :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Vivek K. Tiwari

11 Years Ago

Thank you ..... so much .
Dakshta

11 Years Ago

Most welcome :)
Wow
soooooo sweet indeed.....

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Vivek K. Tiwari

11 Years Ago

thank you so much ....

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Added on October 7, 2013
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Tags: love, teen, break up, life, happines, sucides, cuts, eyes, stupidity

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Vivek K. Tiwari
Vivek K. Tiwari

Kota, Rajasthan, India



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