"With the students ..  "

"With the students .. "

A Poem by Vivek K. Tiwari
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When we were/are students we do have memories and learning which are golden part of our lives , no matter how good or bad they have been to us . We do really miss them all .

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Creepy bed , stabbby clothes ,
And dusty table and books lying everwhere,
With the hope they will be ever finished someday ,

This all we got in his/her room,
A phone call from home which we fear to recieve,
With the scoldings we start and end our days ,

Pressure that we beare from everywhere ,
Playing with our own future in a hope to hit a
century,
With some bestest buddies to die for you,

That's all a student got to face the world,

To be a hardy boy/girl with a soft heart to hide ,
Breaking of that we fear from ,
With the fear to fail with expectations ,
Which we never choosed ourselves,

That's all fear a student got to face the world .

With the head up and fighting hard we move ,
Crushing other and supporting few ,
We struggle the battle more drasting with the
greatest weapon ever made ,Pen.

We cry when found alone ,
We love when found with beloved ,
We slatters the rules and make our owns.

That's all feelings a student got to face the world .


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© 2013 Vivek K. Tiwari


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Vivek K. Tiwari
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I love it! Every single word is so relatable.. Brilliant job you have done here.. keep up the good work!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Vivek K. Tiwari

11 Years Ago

Thank you ...... .... i hope i can continue so . Thanks for encouraging me .
i loved it!
i love my schooldays too.
you did a great job vivek.
thanks for sharing ! :-D

Posted 11 Years Ago


i loved it!
i love my schooldays too.
you did a great job vivek.
thanks for sharing ! :-D

Posted 11 Years Ago


Vivek K. Tiwari

11 Years Ago

thank you so much ..... hope you like my further poems too ...

Vivek
nice poem... simple and honest depiction of the innocence of school days

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Vivek K. Tiwari

11 Years Ago

thank you so much .... sivan
a wonderful read truly....:)
made me remind my schooldays...i felt like for a while i went there though your words:)
well done friend:)

saumya:)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Vivek K. Tiwari

11 Years Ago

Thank you so much .. saumya ...

I believe i may be able to write far better and thanks.. read more

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Added on September 8, 2013
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Tags: students, life, happiness, sadness, golden days

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Vivek K. Tiwari
Vivek K. Tiwari

Kota, Rajasthan, India



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