This wasn't expected

I want to know what people get out of this when they read this. As being the writer I know what I initially wanted but I want to hear and see how others portray and analyze it! Please let me know :)

Peaceful and sunny,
Warm and welcoming,
Skies were blue and had streaks of red
The wind filled me up with sweet stories in my head

Easy and naive,
The beautiful sun fell asleep
Skies became dark and clouds got thick,
It was harder to see the stars...
That was part of the trick

Shocked and confused
The eye of the storm was amused
it came through and erupted hard and quick
The lightening struck at me like a enemy with a sword stick

This wasn't expected
I didn't ask for this....

The storm was strong and took control
I lost everything that night,

Including my sanity and soul.

Author's Note

What do you all take out of this when you read it? Let me know please, with love Lucy B ❤️

Reviews

[...Relic...]

There are two things. One is literal. You were hit by lightning. The other is deeper. Someone may have come into your life when things were serene and peaceful and turned it all upside down on you. Are people not like storms that pass our way? When the storm stays longer than it should, turmoil is bound to grip us.

I liked this, good one Lucy.

[...Relic...]

Oh, and btw, welcome to WC. :)