suicidal lovers

a poem I wrote when I was bored its unfinished I dont have the finished version with me, I will fix it when I can

They say parting is such sweet sorrow, its not for me I'll see you in a distant tomarrow.

 

when someone dies it brings such grieveing I love you I'm sorry I'm leaving.

 

You never held me never spoke my name, but your sexy and I love you just the same.

 

I know I'm dieing at my own hand, dont cry because I'll see you in a distant land.

 

now as I push that knife in deep, I feel your touch I hear you weep.

Author's Note

my mom loved the finished version of this, I HOPE SOMEONE DOESNT POST THIS ONE ON TWITTER TOO.

Reviews

[Nevile Longbottom]

This was such a beautiful masterpiece. It brought tears to my eyes.